Blog 4

Foreign Athletic Limits
I feel that this paper should get a C- because of a couple issues. One issue I had with this paper is the writer did not support his/her opinion very well. I was not persuaded that he/she was very persistent in proving their point. There was, however, good citation of the sources. Another issue I had with the essay is there is an abundance of grammatical errors.

Online College vs. Online High School
This paper would have received a B+ from me. I fell that way because unlike the first essay it had very few grammatical errors. Also the writer's theses statement was well supported and proven immediately. The essay was well put together overall.

Predisposed to Divorce
This paper would most likely receive and A or A+ from me. I say this because the paper was VERY well organized and it flowed very well. The writer proved his/her point and suppported their opinion throughout the whole paper. There were a few punctuation errors that were almost not noticable. Other than that this paper is the best overall.

NAACP Case Agianst Gun Manufacturers
I would have given this a C-. I say this because first of all, there was very little support to the theses statement. However, it was presented well almost immedeatly. The sentence structure and flow was not very good and if it was the writer could have written a much better paper.